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Okay, here's a really, really bad poem I wrote, but it's my best so far [Jun. 28th, 2003|05:44 pm]
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Writing's more my thing. Hopefully.
I see...
I see the land change and the dinosaurs disappear
I see a new time beginning
I see the ancient forests, rivers and plains
I see these places nurturing new species as they come into being
I see a new kind of animal crossing the bridge into this land
I see them respecting the beauty that gave them life
I see someting coming across the endless sea
I see a strange new animal planting a symbol that the land is now owned
I see the slaughter of the way things used to be
I see the destruction of everything beautiful
I see the land claimed, the forests cut, the animals killed
I see an ocean of symmetrical squares of concrete
I see this ocean growing, pushing back all else
I see mass extinction, more so than before
I see the world dying, crying out for help
And I cry over the bones of the earth

From: taer_silveroak
2003-06-28 09:03 pm (UTC)
Ah.. a sad story about the timeline of this world, I imagine. Very nice, and very troubling, at the same time. I saw it all in my mind as you described it.
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[User Picture]From: minuetcat
2003-06-29 10:30 am (UTC)


Cool! Yeah, that's what it is. Thanks for reading it.
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From: treepatter
2003-06-29 07:23 pm (UTC)
To me poetry is just an expression of what you're feeling, or seeing, no matter how you decide to "dress it up". You accomplished that in your way.
I hope you will post more as time goes on.
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[User Picture]From: minuetcat
2003-06-29 10:37 pm (UTC)


Thank you very much--I will try to.
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